“It’s kind of simple, don’t you think?” Keisha turned from the painting she had just placed, ready for tonight’s showing. The gallery had asked her for months to let them show Jordan’s work. Now this youngster was following her around with a comment on everything. Well, Keisha had had enough.
Wow, Dascha. This story blew me away. How sad. It’s also incredibly beautiful that he was able to communicate and express his final message to Keisha.
Really lovely, Dascha. This is resonating with me!
Excellent, Dascha. Sad, but excellent. One of your best.
This is fantastic. Honestly, I don't think the last line is necessary but the story overall is stellar.